Showing posts with label Griffin Artist Card. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Griffin Artist Card. Show all posts

Friday, 1 June 2012

Without the turg, there's too much drama

On 23 May 2012, Melita Rowston was a guest blogger on Griffin Artist Card.  She wrote it for Erin.

Without the turg, there’s too much drama.

Workshops, rehearsal processes…. For some writers, they are the stuff of nightmares. I’ve always been a little nervous and a lot excited just before a workshop or rehearsal process commences. I love working with actors and I love hearing my words come to life. Although, sometimes I have not loved anyone very much after a workshop – especially when the actors and director have pummelled my words into a former shadow of themselves.

Over the years, I’ve learnt how to come out of this process unscathed, and wildly happy with the results. So, here’s my Writer’s List of Ingredients for a Great Rehearsal Process. Or something like that.

The process for the writer is about listening. Constantly listening. And reading. Reading between the lines, reading body language, reading motivations, reading gesture. It doesn’t matter what the overlying structure of the rehearsal process is – in the case of Crushed – four weeks of intermittent script workshops, then four weeks of actor rehearsal, what matters for the writer, is being constantly present in the room, reading and listening and definitely not speaking.

Speaking.

I stopped speaking during the rehearsals and workshops a long time ago. I found that the more I spoke, the more destructive I was being to the process. The more I defended my choices or explained the meaning behind a line or a scene, the less benefit I was gaining from the expertise in the room.

Listening.

Why does a sentence sound chewy? Why is a scene falling flat? Why is a joke not playing? Simply listening to the dialogue, the actor’s inhale and exhale of breath, the words that are emphasised, laboured over or underplayed is the first step. Listening to the type of questions the actors and director are asking of you and the comments they are making, the next.

Reading.

Reading the actor’s body language while they deliver lines, ask questions and make comments is the third important step. Is it the text that is the problem? Or is it a gap in the actors knowledge about the subject matter of the scene they are reading, ie: they don’t know much about astrology so all the technical terms are falling flat. Is it that the actor doesn’t want to come across as a ‘bad’ character, so all their feedback is about twisting that character into someone likeable? Does the actor want more lines, a bigger role? Is an actor saying something, anything, just so they look like they are contributing?

And the director, is the director’s feedback more about driving the text into the directorial vision they wish to impose on the play? Is there is a problem elsewhere in the scene, and the director’s instinct is right, but they are articulating the wrong source of the problem?

Is everyone just tired? And of course, are they just plain right?

The elephant at the table.

It is an absolute necessity to have a dramaturg at the table. Now, this comes back to all that listening and reading and not speaking stuff. It’s tiring work. It is like rocket science. Especially when a cast of three and a director may all have different ideas about a scene and are all getting rather passionate about vocalising them.

Who do you listen to without listening too much? Should you take a hatchet to the lot? Who’s speaking for you?

The dramaturg. They speak for you. They back you. They fight for you. They’re your AD, your PA. They don’t have a directorial vision or a line count running through their heads. They’re not looking at the play through the eyes of one character or the shades of ‘shall we turn this scene into a pre-recorded animation?’

They are looking at the words, the overall shape, the drive, the relationship and action lines, everyone at the table, and the writer.

Sometimes a writer can be overwhelmed by too much feedback. Sometimes a writer listens too much or loses contact with their intuition. Sometimes a writer gets a little lost.

Often undervalued and ignored, the dramaturg will become the player you will be oh-so relieved to have beside you, holding your metaphorical hand, a spare pencil and eraser always close by. They are the ones who will calm the room and suggest an altogether different solution - perhaps a perfect word to round off a final scene…  

Do yourself a favour and go out and get one today.

And while you’re there, buy a ticket to my play:




Sunday, 22 April 2012

Melita: Artist of The Week: Griffin Theatre's blog!

In case you missed Melita as 'Artist of the Week' on Griffin Theatre Company's blog last week, here's the repost: 
What are you working on currently?

I’ve just handed in the locked down script for my play Crushed, which starts rehearsal on Monday. I had the luxury of a month of staggered script workshops with the cast, director and dramatrug. We workshopped each scene on the floor, questioned relationship and action lines, rewrote chewy dialogue and sharpened the turning points. The actors start rehearsal knowing that any further changes are going to be super slight. How awesome is that for an independent production?

Who, or what, inspires you to create?

Well, I love my country. Call me unfashionable or just plain downright weird, but I really love this country! I don’t have a Southern Cross tatt, I hate sport, and I’ve never gambled, but there’s an essential part of me that feels such a strong connection to this place, to our stories. I started writing for theatre because I felt a strong pull to tell the many stories of this beautiful, fraught and complex country that I am so proud to call my home.

What was the most interesting thing you saw recently?

I’m a bit obsessed with Brene Brown at the moment. I recently caught her TED talk and it still hasn’t left me. Brene’s a research professor who studies vulnerability and shame. ‘Only when we are brave enough to explore the darkness will we discover the infinite power of our light.’ I’m writing a new play called Goodnight Moon and in that context, her work reaffirms much about the human condition. It’s charged me to want to write flawed, vulnerable and very confused characters!
Passing the TED love on:

What is the best piece of advice that you've been given?

Margot Nash, my screenwriting mentor at UTS, said to me, ‘Don’t listen too much.’ She was talking about listening to feedback. Feedback can get in the way. I’ve learnt this the hard way! Ultimately, I’ve learnt to trust my own impulses and tell the story my heart wants to tell. I think of what Margot said every time I go into a script workshop.

Who, past or present, would you like to share a meal with and why?

Berthe Morisot. She was a French Impressionist painter. I saw quite a few of her paintings when I was living in Paris. Berthe was good friends with Manet and also sat for him. In those paintings, there’s a delicious unspoken relationship that plays out between Berthe, the sitter, and Manet, the artist. (I might be writing about this)… They were both married, but I totally reckon they did it. I’d ask her if they did it. And if she has a good recipe for homemade pate.